Teen Titans GO - RSJ and Jman

A slightly new version of the original, this time brighter and the title colors changed. For starters, Jason Farrington suggested that the title have yellow text instead of blue. Second, I was lucky enough to ask Fred Perry of Antarctic Press' "Gold Digger" fame. He offered some worthwhile critiques:

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The teen titans picture was really well done. Professional quality.
The lighting and coloring on the characters are of the calibre of anything I've seen in diamond previews most profiled books. I would have spiced up the bg some. It can be colorful as long as it's lighter, and the line weights of the characters lets you really go nuts with the background. Since green and violet seem to dominate the page, I might have had fire-style speed line explosion for a background and had a secondary lightsource from behind striking all the characters.
Not really anything to fix this picture. It's not broke.
Just what I would do.

F.

PS. Terra is sooo cute up there!

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All great advice, and I want to learn, so here are the changes. Hopefully you'll find this an improvement over the last one.